MY RUGBY STORY

Kia ora my name is Raharuhi in my narrative writing i'am learning to make up a story for my movie making. I used google docs for my writing and how we make our movie we used i pad to video and used green screen and you tube to post it on you tube. The thing I like about my story was acting and what i didn't like was running a lot. And the thing that I found easy was writing and the thing I found hard was planning. my next learning step is not to change our movie

Rugby game

Today ashton loma buti and has a double nee and Raharuhi messam is big and play number 8  james mccaw is big and play number 7  .fast and a kicker  went to Moerewa rugby

field and had a rugby game. when ashton lomu kicked it off Raharuhi messam it and james macaw chass the ball then i ran up to james mccaw

then raha messam  steps james mccaw. (I try to run but You see i’M not that fast)then ashton lomu (comes in like a wrecking ball) and cripples  Raharuhi messam( said ho dat who Der) then james mccaw. At motown rugby field james mccaw ran to his place and got his Lambo and picked him up and took him to the hospital.

rang the hospital then they said we are coming  now .then they broke down and they rang up and said we can’t fix this then he suddenly heard a sound oooaa and then he wakes up it was all a dream and james say wake up my moko  wake up Moko then james sequences raha nose. And a photo of us.and the end.