kawa of care

the boat challenage

TITLE: go to my aunty 50 brithday____________________________________________

Planning

1where? up kaitai

2.who? me my there brother and my dad and sister

3.what? where went to go say happy birthday

4.why?  for our aunty birthday

5.when? on saturday the

Writing

in the weekend i went to my aunty 50 birthday. when we arrived at the house we went to go and hareru my whanau. when we finish  hareru our whanau we went up to the bach to have a look . when we got there my dad said”the grass has grown high”. then he “said we’ll come up and clean it up.then we went back to the house to check if the hangi was ready.when we got to the house my dad asked our cousins if it was ready, he said’  not yet my cuz. it so we waited for the hangi.then our dad told us that the hangi was ready. so we walked down to the the hangi pit and waited to get the hangi out of the pit.when they got it out we took some photos the hangi.then our cousin did karakai.after he finish karakai all the little kids went up to get there food then the adults went up to get there food. after we finish with our food they said  the cake will be out soon. so we ate all of our food and waited for the cake when the cake came out they said all the little kids come up for a photo. when the photo was finished we went to go and get  some cake. after we finish eating the cake we asked if we can take some they said ok.first we went to hareru our whanau then we went back home.

Marking

Ideas	Points	Comment
	4	ok wont forget that miss baker.
Miss Baker	3	Some simple ideas and some detail. Make sure you include all the detail about what you did and saw.

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