My Holiday

Kia ora my name Raharuhi i'am learning to write a recount about our holiday. I used google docs for my writing. what I like about my story is everything because it's so cool and I like my story. what I don't like about my story is nothing because there's not anything to not like

sIn the holiday we went to auckland for my dad, because he had to get a cast on his ankle.

We all went to auckland Me Renata chiefy sapphire and tu pakari and mum.

When we went past the harbour bridge we said” do they have a flash house my mum said no.

When we got to her house we got all of our bags and blanket  and pillow then we kiss and hugged and we had a kai after our I had rest then I went to sleep.

The next day we went to the hospital when we left the house we went to the 2$ shop for a back  scratch. then we arrived at the hospital.

Then we went into the hospital and went up the stairs and went to the waiting room and

When we got there we ask what room did he had to go to and then she said” what’s your name andre palmer alright just wait in the waiting room.

When a lady came she said” this way then we followed her to a room and gave him

Some clothes then she took him up the stairs. Then we went to a mole for some mcdonalds

When we arrived there we went to look for a parking. Next we went in inside and looked for  a macdonalds.

Then we found it, we odded 20 box and the 28 box then we found a spot to sit at. I had two cheese burger and some fries . when we finished we went back to the hospital when we got back we waited in the car

MY RUGBY STORY

Kia ora my name is Raharuhi in my narrative writing i'am learning to make up a story for my movie making. I used google docs for my writing and how we make our movie we used i pad to video and used green screen and you tube to post it on you tube. The thing I like about my story was acting and what i didn't like was running a lot. And the thing that I found easy was writing and the thing I found hard was planning. my next learning step is not to change our movie

Rugby game

Today ashton loma buti and has a double nee and Raharuhi messam is big and play number 8  james mccaw is big and play number 7  .fast and a kicker  went to Moerewa rugby

field and had a rugby game. when ashton lomu kicked it off Raharuhi messam it and james macaw chass the ball then i ran up to james mccaw

then raha messam  steps james mccaw. (I try to run but You see i’M not that fast)then ashton lomu (comes in like a wrecking ball) and cripples  Raharuhi messam( said ho dat who Der) then james mccaw. At motown rugby field james mccaw ran to his place and got his Lambo and picked him up and took him to the hospital.

rang the hospital then they said we are coming  now .then they broke down and they rang up and said we can’t fix this then he suddenly heard a sound oooaa and then he wakes up it was all a dream and james say wake up my moko  wake up Moko then james sequences raha nose. And a photo of us.and the end.

  

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